Fic issues

[tuxedo_elf]

Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?

*Hugs*
Tux

Comments

[larian.livejournal.com]

Do you have a clone or two? I know I drive DA and say_aye nuts, cuz I post so slowly sometimes, but I do like the more laid back pace over there sometimes...

[tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com]

I forgot about those! Yeah, I have two, though I haven't been there much lately! I've actually had SayAye 'babysitting' Gilion for me!

PS: Forgive me if I seem pushy, but if you ever want to chat on IM instead of throwing emails back and forth, just yell!

[say-aye.livejournal.com]

LOL Hahaha, nope, you didn’t! I like it slow too! ^x^ <3 <3 <3