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Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?
*Hugs*
Tux
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?
*Hugs*
Tux
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Date: 2004-09-22 09:54 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 10:16 pm (UTC)From:PS: Forgive me if I seem pushy, but if you ever want to chat on IM instead of throwing emails back and forth, just yell!
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