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Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?
*Hugs*
Tux
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?
*Hugs*
Tux
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Date: 2004-09-22 11:47 am (UTC)From:~Taelin
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Date: 2004-09-22 01:37 pm (UTC)From:*Huggles*
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Date: 2004-09-22 01:30 pm (UTC)From:Not that I would be any help with grammer and such, but I do have an eye for plot...
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Date: 2004-09-22 01:39 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 01:48 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 01:52 pm (UTC)From:no subject
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Date: 2004-09-22 02:31 pm (UTC)From:*Hugs and snogs*
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Date: 2004-09-23 07:05 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 05:14 pm (UTC)From:I see you have plenty of volunteers, so I'll just wait impatiently for the update. *grin*
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Date: 2004-09-22 09:22 pm (UTC)From:It's pretty much there now, just waiting for a couple of people to confirm it for me. If it's not up tonight, it will be tomorrow! :)
*Curls up with Rumil, happily*
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Date: 2004-09-22 09:24 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 09:41 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 09:44 pm (UTC)From:I'm already in WAY too many RPGs, have been addicted for some time! Interestingly, this is the only one where I *don't* play Rumil!
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Date: 2004-09-22 09:54 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-09-22 10:16 pm (UTC)From:PS: Forgive me if I seem pushy, but if you ever want to chat on IM instead of throwing emails back and forth, just yell!
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Date: 2004-09-23 07:06 am (UTC)From: