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Fic issues

Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?

*Hugs*
Tux
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[identity profile] special-majick.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 11:47 am (UTC)(link)
I'll give it a read if you like, hun? *hugs*

~Taelin

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankies!

*Huggles*

[identity profile] punisher8209.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*raises hand*

Not that I would be any help with grammer and such, but I do have an eye for plot...

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
That's cool! I'm not too worried about grammer right now, I can fix any glitches myself, it's the content that concerns me! :)
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[personal profile] sildil 2004-09-22 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too, if you like!

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
WOOT! You can never have too many opinions!

[identity profile] say-aye.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
~bats eyelashes at Tux~ Update? ~runs to her inbox and sits there waiting excitedly~

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*Giggles* In a day or so, yes! Once I've fixed whatever it is that's wrong!

*Hugs and snogs*

[identity profile] say-aye.livejournal.com 2004-09-23 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
Heehee ~waits waits waits~ ;D

[identity profile] larian.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
*Brings Rumil back to Tux, hoping he can help out*

I see you have plenty of volunteers, so I'll just wait impatiently for the update. *grin*

[identity profile] andernilion.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Heehee!
It's pretty much there now, just waiting for a couple of people to confirm it for me. If it's not up tonight, it will be tomorrow! :)

*Curls up with Rumil, happily*

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooops sorry! Was signed in on the wrong LJ!

[identity profile] larian.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh No!! That looks suspiciously like an RPG LJ!! Be careful of the addictive properties of rpgs ...*grin*

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL it is!
I'm already in WAY too many RPGs, have been addicted for some time! Interestingly, this is the only one where I *don't* play Rumil!

[identity profile] larian.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Do you have a clone or two? I know I drive DA and say_aye nuts, cuz I post so slowly sometimes, but I do like the more laid back pace over there sometimes...

[identity profile] tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I forgot about those! Yeah, I have two, though I haven't been there much lately! I've actually had SayAye 'babysitting' Gilion for me!

PS: Forgive me if I seem pushy, but if you ever want to chat on IM instead of throwing emails back and forth, just yell!

[identity profile] say-aye.livejournal.com 2004-09-23 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
LOL Hahaha, nope, you didn’t! I like it slow too! ^x^ <3 <3 <3
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