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tuxedo_elf ([personal profile] tuxedo_elf) wrote2004-09-22 11:41 am
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Fic issues

Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?

*Hugs*
Tux
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[identity profile] special-majick.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 11:47 am (UTC)(link)
I'll give it a read if you like, hun? *hugs*

~Taelin

[identity profile] punisher8209.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*raises hand*

Not that I would be any help with grammer and such, but I do have an eye for plot...
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[personal profile] sildil 2004-09-22 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too, if you like!

[identity profile] say-aye.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
~bats eyelashes at Tux~ Update? ~runs to her inbox and sits there waiting excitedly~

[identity profile] larian.livejournal.com 2004-09-22 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
*Brings Rumil back to Tux, hoping he can help out*

I see you have plenty of volunteers, so I'll just wait impatiently for the update. *grin*
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