Fic issues

[tuxedo_elf]

Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?

*Hugs*
Tux

Comments

[andernilion.livejournal.com]

Heehee!
It's pretty much there now, just waiting for a couple of people to confirm it for me. If it's not up tonight, it will be tomorrow! :)

*Curls up with Rumil, happily*