Fic issues

[tuxedo_elf]

Chapter 9 of Silent Song is written - but I don't know, I'm just not happy with it and I can't figure out why.
Anyone want to read it over and tell me where I'm going wrong?

*Hugs*
Tux

Comments

[special-majick.livejournal.com]

I'll give it a read if you like, hun? *hugs*

~Taelin

[tuxedo-elf.livejournal.com]

Thankies!

*Huggles*