This chapter is so sweet and warm. It gave me warm fuzzies. :) You've captured a nice flow in it, which is, although slow, not at all dull. It's relaxed and lovely.
"well-intentioned nagging" Hehehe.
Re the meeting between Ecthelion and the twins, I'm thinking two things. Firstly, he's lucky he didn't stumble across a pack of female Ecthelion fanelves. Secondly, I'm wondering how someone like Salgant, Eol, or Maeglin might be received if they suddenly turned upon Elrond's doorstep.
Loved it! Thanks, Tux. ♥♥ *huggles*
BTW, I'm updating quickly because I read the fic elsewhere earlier and wrote comments then. So I'm copying and pasting those comments now. xDDD
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Date: 2007-05-12 08:01 am (UTC)From:"well-intentioned nagging" Hehehe.
Re the meeting between Ecthelion and the twins, I'm thinking two things. Firstly, he's lucky he didn't stumble across a pack of female Ecthelion fanelves. Secondly, I'm wondering how someone like Salgant, Eol, or Maeglin might be received if they suddenly turned upon Elrond's doorstep.
Loved it! Thanks, Tux. ♥♥ *huggles*
BTW, I'm updating quickly because I read the fic elsewhere earlier and wrote comments then. So I'm copying and pasting those comments now. xDDD